Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish Why do you think this is happening? What can governments so to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
It is true that we are producing more and more
rubbish
compare
to the past years. Why it so? May be because Suggestion
compares
world
is moving so fast everything available online. We Suggestion
the world
might be keep
buying the things which are not needed.
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might keep
First point
to consider is that human life is changing with Suggestion
The first point
time
. As technology rises its
height on top, we are Accept comma addition
rises, its
also
changing. Many things we are doing
more, which we were not doing in the past at Suggestion
do
certain level
. Suggestion
certain levels
a certain level
Nowadays most
people are working. They prefer to eat Accept comma addition
Nowadays, most
take away
Suggestion
takeaway
food
packets or ready to make food
. As they believe that it saves their time
and energy in their busy work schedule. This
kind of food
packaging are
the main source of Suggestion
is
waste
. The packet food
often contain
plastic box and cutlery along with the carry bag which is Suggestion
often contains
also
unhealthy. After consuming food
those packing goes into rubbish box
. Suggestion
the rubbish box
a rubbish box
Furthermore
, shopping mall often give
carry bags for our items which is useless after on Suggestion
often gives
has often given
time
use
. On the other hand
, online shopping increase drastically, most of the items contain good packing in order to save from damaging. Secondly using
those boxes not only create the dump but Accept comma addition
Secondly, using
also
harming to nature. To make those use
and throw boxes industries need to produce the material by cutting the tree and taking help of our natural resource. Those packing are the other type waste
. Previously fruits and vegetables often sold loose and milk in own milk container this
practice help
to stop producing more Suggestion
helps
rubbish
.
To reduce the rubbish
government and individuals both
should work together. The Government should encourage people to Accept comma addition
individuals, both
use
eco-friendly items and less usage of plastic items. By placing the separate garbage tin in public area for recycles
and non-recycles items Suggestion
recycling
recycled
also
adding help. The government should encourage people by advertising zero waste
ideas and should promote the eco-friendly lifestyles among the citizen of country
. Every household should provide the recycle bin which public can Suggestion
the country
a country
use
their household waste
to turn into fertilizer. As individual
Suggestion
an individual
i
avoid using plastic bags and carry my own bags whenever I want to buy something. Some refers to the speaker or writer
I
time
in a week having
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week, having
homecooked
Suggestion
home cooked
food
in reusable container also
step towards reducing rubbish
.
In conclusion reducing
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conclusion, reducing
rubbish
help our mother earth and an environment clean and healthy. We should stop buying the unnecessary things which is not require
. By taking responsibilities of our own nature to keep it healthy all should take necessary steps.Suggestion
are not required
are not requiring
do not require
don't require
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