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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working not getting enough exercise,what can be done about the problem.

#people #exercise #time #health
Health
 care is one of the fundamental principles a person should follow in their daily life. The
health
 care depending on the person either he
follow
Suggestion
follows
 the
healty
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
health
 practice or unhealthy practice throughout their life. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss why people are not doing
exercise
 that leading to the
health
 problem and what to do to tackle
this
 serious issue. In
this
 era, where there is so much advancement of a technology involves people in various different tasks rather than focusing on the
heathly
having or indicating good health in body or mind; free from infirmity or disease
healthy
 exercises to avoid the
health
 related problems. Usually people waste their time in using social media or playing games
instead
 of going to the gym.
For example
, In
third
 world countries, where people are not
awared
(sometimes followed by 'of') having or showing knowledge or understanding or realization or perception
aware
 about the importance of their
health
 so they usually do not bother to go to the gym to do an
exercise
 to gain healthy benefits. To eradicate
this
 problem, An education about
health
 benefits should be focused rather than advertising unhealthy practices. Most effective
way
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ways
 to reduce the
health
 problems is to aware people about healthy and unhealthy practices so they can differentiate them easily.
For example
, In
first
 world countries,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
usually advertise
Suggestion
usually advertises
 healthy practices resulting increase in awareness among people leading them to do the
exercise
 daily despite their busy schedule. To sum up, It will solely
depends
Suggestion
depend
 on how they brought up and what are their moral values. So
as a result
, some people will prefer to
exercise
 and some will not. Regardless of the moral values and how they brought up still people choose the lifestyle which attracts them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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