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Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#group #tour #guide #travel
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There is no doubt that these
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day
 number of
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
 have been increased all over the world. The question is, when travelling with a
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 number of people, is it better to have a
tour
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guide
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 or not? In
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 essay I am going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it. In terms of advantages, when you travel with a
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 number, the
tour
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guide
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 will be a good idea, where you will be able to see
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many
 places in the city,
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at
 the
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 to gather and commit
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 a
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 will be hard. The
tour
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guide
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 will be able to schedule the right
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 for each visit. To illustrate, the
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 guides are well known
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about
 the country, and
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 will guarantee that you will be able to see the most important
cites
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
sites
 in the country.
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, when you travel with a
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 of people
with out
in absence of
without
 any
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guide
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 you will miss so many places that you have to visit.
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,
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 management will be hard for each member to obligate. In other word, the distance of each visit might be a waste if you do not know each area where it falls.
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, if you travel to a foreign country you will miss the whole
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 trying to translate and understand.
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 is because communicating with people is important to know and understand the things you want. In conclusion,
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 travelling without a
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guide
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 is fun to explore the city with different adventures that you will definitely face in your day to day activities.
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, I believe that travelling with a
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guide
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 is much better in term of
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 management.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational
  • logistics
  • convenience
  • exclusive experiences
  • safety and security
  • spontaneous adventures
  • historical sites
  • cultural practices
  • landmarks
  • insights
  • socialization
  • lifelong friendships
  • restrictive
  • authentic experiences
  • skip-the-line
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