You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, - Complain about the situation - Say why this is a problem - And propose ways to reduce the noise

Hi John, I am Tina, one of the University

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from the North Wing which is located near to the newly open campus restaurant, Blessing Restaurant, which

open

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until midnight. The café has not been a blessing to me because

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the day they open

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week, there was a constant noise especially after 10 PM every single day.

This

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a huge problem

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since the noise is coming right at the

rest

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time for most of the residences. To add fuel

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the fire, exam week will be coming in two weeks. I believe

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will highly affect our concentration for having

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of

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at night.

Therefore

, I suggest that the restaurant manager to enforced a new rule to limit the selling and consuming alcohol after 9 PM.

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triggered by alcohol will be reduced and

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the noise will be well controlled. Thank you for your attention to

this

matter. Hope the regulation could be implied soon. Yours sincerely, Tina.