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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in the XXI century and sea levels continuing to rise

#threats #face #xxi #century #sea #levels #rise
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Process
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The process
 of global warming will be one the most important problems in the future because
lifes
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the lives
lives
life
 of all mankind
are depend
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depend
 on
this
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 process. In fact, Earth's surface temperature has been rising since the end of the XIX th century. Every year temperature becomes higher and it is so hard for people to find the solution of
this
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 problem. All mankind is worrying because global warming
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 on sea level which is growing. In some European countries,
for example
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 in Venice, sea levels
exceeds
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exceed
 normal by 120
centimeters
a metric unit of length equal to one hundredth of a meter
centimetres
. Water If the situation goes
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 way
then
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 cities may disappear from the face of the Earth in a few decades. Water inflicts tremendous destruction
on
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of
 buildings, destroying them.
This
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 process affects not only on human's
lifes but
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lives, but
lives but
 on animals' ones too. A lot of species become endangered and some of them died. Global warming changes habitat conditions and
ot
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
to
it
 every specie can adapt to them. In conclusion, want to note that it is important to pay attention to
this
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 problem because our lives depend on
this
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 process. Many people are involved in the search for new solutions. We need to help each other because only in
this
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 way we can help our planet.

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