You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter describe the training course you want to do. explain what the company could do to help you. say how the course will be useful for your job.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ishan Saverdekar, working in
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management department as a developer at Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India location. I am writing
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letter to ask for your support in terms of finance and
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leaves to attend a training
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which is helpful and I have found
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course
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in the advertisement of yesterday’s newspaper namely Divyabhaskar. The
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name is Oracle SQL
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Administrator,
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helpful chapters to optimize
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speed, organizing the structure of files located in the
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, and
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develop
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strategy for
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backup plan to be used in the different critical scenarios. After completing
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course
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, I will be able to provide more security and reliability to
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which is
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important to keep
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a client
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client
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for a long time.
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, it is a great addition to me and to the company itself. Can you please allow me a week
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leaves and support me with the cost of the training? As I am a married person and have a family, I am not able to afford
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much leaves or the
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cost itself. I look forward to your positive reply. Yours faithfully, Ishan Saverdekar
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • training course
  • skillset enhancement
  • educational leave
  • sponsorship
  • reimbursement
  • knowledge integration
  • work efficiency
  • career progression
  • continuing education
  • team contribution
  • productivity boost
  • expertise building
  • industry standards
  • hands-on experience
  • networking opportunities
  • cutting-edge techniques
  • best practices
  • return on investment
  • in-house training
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