GOVERNMENT PROHIBITING THE UNDERAGE CHILDREN FOR GETTING FULL TIME JOBS IN CERTAIN COUNTRIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

#government #children #time #jobs #countries

IMPLEMENTATION OF

CHILD

LABOUR ACT IN MANY COUNTRIES HAS PUT A LIMIT ON THE WORKING HOURS OF EMPLOYEES WHO FALL IN THE AGE GROUP OF 15-18 YEARS AND COMPLETELY BANNED THE SAME FOR THOSE UNDER 15. I AM COMPLETELY AREE WITH

THIS

LEGISLATION. I WILL,

HOWEVER

, SUGGEST SOME SOLUTIONS WHICH WILL SUPPORT TEENAGERS AND THEIR FAMILY FOR THEIR EASY SURVIVAL AND PREVENT THEM FROM DOING ANY KIND OF LABOUR. TO EMBARK ON, ADMITTEDLY, EMPLOYMENT IS AN INDESPENSABLE PART OF HUMAN LIFE.

HOWEVER

, EARLY

CHILDHOOD

JOB IS ONE OF THE STUMBLING BLOCK IN THE PROGRESSION OF AN ADOLESCENT. IF GOVERNMENT DONOT RESTRICT THE JOB HOURS OF CHILDREN, THEY WILL PLACE STUDY AT SECONDARY PRIORITY

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CONSEQUENTLY

, STUDIES GET SUFFERED A LOT. INDULGING INTO NUISANCE COMPANY IS ANOTHER THREAT

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WHICH THEY ARE PRONE TO AT WORK, WHERE THEY COME ACROSS VARIETY OF PEOPLE

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AND IMMATURITY AT

SUCH

AN EARLY STAGE OF LIFE

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AS A RESULT

, DISABLE THEM TO INFER THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN RIGHT AND WRONG. TO EXEMPLIFY, AS PER THE SURVEY CONDUCTED BY

CHILD

DEVELOPMENT AGENCY OF ENGLAND IN 2017, 50% OF THE CHILDREN WORLDWIDE IN THE CHILDREN IMPRISONMENT ARE THOSE WHO LEFT THEIR STUDIES AND GET INFLUENCED BY BAD COMPANY AT WORK. PROBING

FURTHER

, I WILL SUGGEST SOME PRACTICAL SOLUTIONS TO OVERCOME THE EFFECTS OF

CHILD

LABOUR. USUALLY, WORKING IN

CHILDHOOD

IS CHOOSEN NOT BY CHOISE

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NONETHELESS

, ITS THE CIRCUMSTANCES LIKE POVERTY AND FAMILY RESPONSIBILITES, WHICH FORCES AN INDIVIDUAL TO WORK IN THE AGE WHEN SAME AGEMATES ENJOY THEIR

CHILDHOOD

. TO HALT THESE PROBLEMS, GOVERNMENT SHOULD HOLD THE HAND OF ITS COUNTRYMEN BY PROVIDING THEM PLETHORA OF FACILITIES

SUCH

AS FREE EDUCATION TILL UNIVERSITY LEVEL TO ALL, SUPPORING PEOPLE TO RUN THEIR LIVELIHOOD BY PROVIDING THEM BASIC NESESSASITIES OF LIFE

SUCH

AS FOOD, SHELTER AND CLOTHING. APART FROM THAT, EMPLOYEMENT OPPORTUNITIES TO BE GIVEN TO SINGLE MOTHER OR FATHER, SO THAT THEY CAN RUN THEIR HOUSE SMOOTHLY WITHOUT BEING LETTING THEIR

CHILD

TO GO FOR WORK. LOOKING AT THE DELIBERAITONS, IT CAN BE CATEGORICALLY ESTABLISHED THAT THE DECISION OF THE GOVERNMENT TOWARDS REFRAINING THE

CHILDHOOD

JOB IS A GREAT EFFORT PROVIDED THEY SHOULD

ALSO

THINK ABOUT THE OTHER ALTERNATIVES WHICH CAN BE PROVIDED TO THE PUBLIC.

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GOVERNMENT PROHIBITING THE UNDERAGE CHILDREN FOR GETTING FULL TIME JOBS IN CERTAIN COUNTRIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as railway and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. Say why a driving license is advantageous. Recommend a driving school. Give extra guidance/tips.

Is using physical force to discipline children acceptable?