GOVERNMENT PROHIBITING THE UNDERAGE CHILDREN FOR GETTING FULL TIME JOBS IN CERTAIN COUNTRIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

#government #children #time #jobs #countries

IMPLEMENTATION OF

CHILD

LABOUR ACT IN MANY COUNTRIES HAS PUT A LIMIT ON THE WORKING HOURS OF EMPLOYEES WHO FALL IN THE AGE GROUP OF 15-18 YEARS AND COMPLETELY BANNED THE SAME FOR THOSE UNDER 15. I AM COMPLETELY AREE WITH

THIS

LEGISLATION. I WILL,

HOWEVER

, SUGGEST SOME SOLUTIONS WHICH WILL SUPPORT TEENAGERS AND THEIR FAMILY FOR THEIR EASY SURVIVAL AND PREVENT THEM FROM DOING ANY KIND OF LABOUR. TO EMBARK ON, ADMITTEDLY, EMPLOYMENT IS AN INDESPENSABLE PART OF HUMAN LIFE.

HOWEVER

, EARLY

CHILDHOOD

JOB IS ONE OF THE STUMBLING BLOCK IN THE PROGRESSION OF AN ADOLESCENT. IF GOVERNMENT DONOT RESTRICT THE JOB HOURS OF CHILDREN, THEY WILL PLACE STUDY AT SECONDARY PRIORITY

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CONSEQUENTLY

, STUDIES GET SUFFERED A LOT. INDULGING INTO NUISANCE COMPANY IS ANOTHER THREAT

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WHICH THEY ARE PRONE TO AT WORK, WHERE THEY COME ACROSS VARIETY OF PEOPLE

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AND IMMATURITY AT

SUCH

AN EARLY STAGE OF LIFE

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AS A RESULT

, DISABLE THEM TO INFER THE DIFFERENCES BETWEEN RIGHT AND WRONG. TO EXEMPLIFY, AS PER THE SURVEY CONDUCTED BY

CHILD

DEVELOPMENT AGENCY OF ENGLAND IN 2017, 50% OF THE CHILDREN WORLDWIDE IN THE CHILDREN IMPRISONMENT ARE THOSE WHO LEFT THEIR STUDIES AND GET INFLUENCED BY BAD COMPANY AT WORK. PROBING

FURTHER

, I WILL SUGGEST SOME PRACTICAL SOLUTIONS TO OVERCOME THE EFFECTS OF

CHILD

LABOUR. USUALLY, WORKING IN

CHILDHOOD

IS CHOOSEN NOT BY CHOISE

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NONETHELESS

, ITS THE CIRCUMSTANCES LIKE POVERTY AND FAMILY RESPONSIBILITES, WHICH FORCES AN INDIVIDUAL TO WORK IN THE AGE WHEN SAME AGEMATES ENJOY THEIR

CHILDHOOD

. TO HALT THESE PROBLEMS, GOVERNMENT SHOULD HOLD THE HAND OF ITS COUNTRYMEN BY PROVIDING THEM PLETHORA OF FACILITIES

SUCH

AS FREE EDUCATION TILL UNIVERSITY LEVEL TO ALL, SUPPORING PEOPLE TO RUN THEIR LIVELIHOOD BY PROVIDING THEM BASIC NESESSASITIES OF LIFE

SUCH

AS FOOD, SHELTER AND CLOTHING. APART FROM THAT, EMPLOYEMENT OPPORTUNITIES TO BE GIVEN TO SINGLE MOTHER OR FATHER, SO THAT THEY CAN RUN THEIR HOUSE SMOOTHLY WITHOUT BEING LETTING THEIR

CHILD

TO GO FOR WORK. LOOKING AT THE DELIBERAITONS, IT CAN BE CATEGORICALLY ESTABLISHED THAT THE DECISION OF THE GOVERNMENT TOWARDS REFRAINING THE

CHILDHOOD

JOB IS A GREAT EFFORT PROVIDED THEY SHOULD

ALSO

THINK ABOUT THE OTHER ALTERNATIVES WHICH CAN BE PROVIDED TO THE PUBLIC.

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GOVERNMENT PROHIBITING THE UNDERAGE CHILDREN FOR GETTING FULL TIME JOBS IN CERTAIN COUNTRIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous government's expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In genergal, people do not have such a close relationship with their neighbours as they did in the past. Why is this so, and what can be done to improve contact between neighbours?

Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of admission fees outweigh the disadvantages?