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Politician's private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#politician #lives #newspapers
With the advancement in technology, anyone's private
life
 can be published in a newspaper. I agree that
politician’s
Suggestion
politicians’
 lives should not be published in newspapers or any other medium no matter what the story is. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss both scenarios on
this
 serious issue. Politicians private lives should not be discussed no matter how bad or good they are. Discussing someone's private
life
 can be taken as a very personal matter and there are no benefits in discussing someone's
life
instead
 it backfires many times in terms of different controversies.
For example
, In
first
 world countries, It is banned to publish any politician or celebrity
life
 in the newspaper or any other medium to give them total control
on
Suggestion
of
 their private
life
.
Furthermore
, If it is published in the newspaper,
then
 there might be some consequences.
However
, publishing the private
life
 will demoralize the victim who is working day and night for the country resulting the resignation from the duty.
For example
, In Pakistan once there was a general who was very obedient to his country, but once his private
life
get
Suggestion
gets
 published in the electronic media and other mediums resulting his resignation from the services right away. To sum up, I believe it is better to avoid publishing anyone private lives on electronic media or any other medium either they are a politician or not. Despite the awareness and protection of
this
 cause some media will still showcase politician’s private
life
 to increase their channel views and ratings.
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