some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays,

climate

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change

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represent

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represents

an import part of the

worls

everything that exists anywhere

world

work's

works

actual issue. The

temperature

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grow

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grows

up

cotinuously

at every point

continuously

and the it is

constated

get or ask advice from

consulted

contested

contacted

that the glaciers melt is

speed

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speeding

up. Our habit

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affects

the nature, so for

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reason many people think that the best way to face

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problem is to learn how to live with

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condition.

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however

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However

, it is preferable to resolve the problem by changing the way we live. I believe that

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too late so we have to learn how to live with

climate

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change

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, but household and

industies

the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise

industries

should start to become more environmentally friendly and apply more restricted policy.

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of all, waste is the main cause of higher

temperature

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. Rubbish can be

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under

different form

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a different form

different forms

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as chemical product or household waste. Indeed, they represent the major factor of pollution. Chemical

for example

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, are

dump

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dumped

in

river

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the river

rivers

a river

and the dangerous particles containing in these products kill sea animals and increase the

temperature

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of the water. Unfortunately, the higher degree of ocean

are

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is

the main reason of glacier melting, but without glacier it is impossible for the earth to maintain a living condition for inhabitants.

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According

to the professor Montlevi in his article for the CNRS, it is estimated that in 2060 the

daily

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day

temperature

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will be over 40°C all the year.

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, I believe that industries should start to look for

biologic alternative

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a biologic alternative

to chemical product.

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, globalisation

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is

also

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responsible

of

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for

climate

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change

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. In 2050, it is estimated that we will be 7 billion people in the world. The main preoccupation of the governments and industries is to feed them. For

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reason they

favorise

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overproductions of food and agriculture.

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, agriculture

need

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needs

field particularly

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field, particularly

for countries who are in charge of producing food for all the population. Generally,

agricultor

a large-scale farming enterprise

agriculture

agricultural

take

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takes

it by burning forest to increase their

hectars

(abbreviated 'ha') a unit of surface area equal to 100 ares (or 10,000 square meters)

hectares

histories

of crops.

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, Amazonia is known to be the lung of the

world but

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world, but

also

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for being the main

productor

someone who manufactures something

producer

product or

of

meal

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the meal

. In

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part of the world we can

constate

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contact

consult

a real issue because

government

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the government

encourage

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encourages

agricultar

a large-scale farming enterprise

agriculture

to burn

forest

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the forest

for increase the quantity of

crop

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the crop

crops

, but with deforestation the level of air decrease.

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, without trees

to help

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help

them to breath and the liberation of CO2 by burning forest it accelerates the

climate

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change

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. In conclusion, pollution is the main responsible factor of the degradation of our

climate

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.

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this

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This

is due to our bad habits by throwing chemical product in rivers and

favorise

promote over another

favours

overconsumption

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by producing more than our real needs.