some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays,
climate
change
represent
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represents
an import part of the
worls
everything that exists anywhere
world
work's
works
actual issue. The
temperature
grow
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grows
up
cotinuously
at every point
continuously
and the it is
constated
get or ask advice from
consulted
contested
contacted
that the glaciers melt is
speed
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speeding
up. Our habit
affect
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affects
the nature, so for
this
reason many people think that the best way to face
this
problem is to learn how to live with
this
condition.
however
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However
, it is preferable to resolve the problem by changing the way we live. I believe that
this
too late so we have to learn how to live with
climate
change
, but household and
industies
the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industries
should start to become more environmentally friendly and apply more restricted policy.
First
of all, waste is the main cause of higher
temperature
. Rubbish can be
constated
close interaction
contacted
consulted
under
different form
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a different form
different forms
such
as chemical product or household waste. Indeed, they represent the major factor of pollution. Chemical
for example
, are
dump
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dumped
in
river
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the river
rivers
a river
and the dangerous particles containing in these products kill sea animals and increase the
temperature
of the water. Unfortunately, the higher degree of ocean
are
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is
the main reason of glacier melting, but without glacier it is impossible for the earth to maintain a living condition for inhabitants.
Acoording
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According
to the professor Montlevi in his article for the CNRS, it is estimated that in 2060 the
daily
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day
temperature
will be over 40°C all the year.
Therefore
, I believe that industries should start to look for
biologic alternative
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a biologic alternative
to chemical product.
Moreover
, globalisation
are
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is
also
responsible
of
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for
climate
change
. In 2050, it is estimated that we will be 7 billion people in the world. The main preoccupation of the governments and industries is to feed them. For
this
reason they
favorise
overproductions of food and agriculture.
However
, agriculture
need
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needs
field particularly
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field, particularly
for countries who are in charge of producing food for all the population. Generally,
agricultor
a large-scale farming enterprise
agriculture
agricultural
take
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takes
it by burning forest to increase their
hectars
(abbreviated 'ha') a unit of surface area equal to 100 ares (or 10,000 square meters)
hectares
histories
of crops.
For instance
, Amazonia is known to be the lung of the
world but
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world, but
also
for being the main
productor
someone who manufactures something
producer
product or
of
meal
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the meal
. In
this
part of the world we can
constate
close interaction
contact
consult
a real issue because
government
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the government
encourage
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encourages
agricultar
a large-scale farming enterprise
agriculture
to burn
forest
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the forest
for increase the quantity of
crop
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the crop
crops
, but with deforestation the level of air decrease.
Consequently
, without trees
to help
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help
them to breath and the liberation of CO2 by burning forest it accelerates the
climate
change
. In conclusion, pollution is the main responsible factor of the degradation of our
climate
.
this
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This
is due to our bad habits by throwing chemical product in rivers and
favorise
promote over another
favours
overconsumption
by producing more than our real needs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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