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One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The World Health Organization estimates that over a billion people suffer from hunger worldwide. That's despite the fact that more
food
 is being produced than ever before.
This
 happens for a variety of reasons. Much of the
food
 is lost during the harvest, partly due to the lack of storage facilities or transportation options. In industrial countries 40 percent of all
food
 is destroyed rather than eaten.
Also
, over a
third
 of the world's arable land is used to grow animal feed - corn, grain and
soy beans
a source of oil; used for forage and soil improvement and as food
soybeans
. The increasing number of crops used as biofuel
also impact
Suggestion
has also impacted
is also impacting
 the amount of land used to grow
food
. That drives up prices, making
food
 ever more expensive, and there's no change to be seen in the foreseeable future. The number of people on the planet is growing - in 2050 there will be over 8 billion. Most will live in cities, forecasts say, and the demand for meat and energy will continue to rise. Many experts say conventional agriculture won't get us very far in solving those problems. They say that the only way to boost agricultural production and fight global hunger is with the help of genetically altered plants.

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