In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Consumers are favouring the big malls compared to local shops since
last
decade. In my opinion, there must be a balance between the big shopping centres and small-scale shops. First
paragraph demonstarte
the pros and cons of small shopping Suggestion
demonstrates
demonstrate
centers
and the an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
second
paragraph explains about the advantages and disadvantages of large malls. Let us discuss more about this
in detail in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, little shops exists
since a long time back and they supply the essential needs of the poor people in general. Suggestion
has existed
For instance
, the person in a remote village has access to the local shops than big shopping-centers
and their daily needs are addressed by the small shops. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
Furthermore
, price
of commodities Suggestion
the price
prices
are
cheaper in the minor shops. Suggestion
is
Also
so many people start their enterprenuer
journey as local businessmen because it is a tiny business. The downside is income generating from the minor shops is not suffice for the survival of the shop owner.
On the flip side, big malls are generating more revenue and recruiting young people into jobs, Suggestion
entrepreneurial
entrepreneur
there by
lower the unemployment problem in the local area. But the remuneration of the by that means or because of that
thereby
sales men
in these jobs is meagre. a man salesperson
salesmen
Furthermore
, big shopping-centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
have keep
in view of rich people in the society. Suggestion
have kept
For example
,
if we take the movie ticket in PVR Mall, Hyderabad, it would cost 500 bucks compared to a local movie Accept space
,
theater
. By considering all these factors, one can say that there should be a parity between the large malls and small shops.
The conclusion is we will encourage the enormous a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
shoping
-searching for or buying goods or services
shopping
shipping
centers
as well as the small shops in a view that both will be beneficial to the society. an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
centre
Also certain
measures should be taken to lessen the prices in the big malls so that they would be available to the common public as well.Accept comma addition
Also, certain
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