You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfies with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter •Describe the item you bought and why you need it •explain why you are not happy with it •say what you would like the manager to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding an item which I recently bought from your local store.
A few days back, I bought a white puffer
jacket
from your local Merivale store and it was on sale for $65.99. I wanted to give it as a present to my brother on his birthday. This
product was very much special for me because my brother needs a jacket
as he currently don't
have one
The product was perfect when I tried it but when I reached home and showed it to my children, I came to know that the sleeves from Change the verb form
doesn't
left
sleeve are broken. Correct article usage
the left
This
created a big hole on the left side of the jacket
. However
, I immediately went to the store for an exchange but the jackets were sold out.
At this
point, I would request you to arrange an
exact same Correct article usage
the
jacket
for me as I want to send it to my brother and his birthday is coming up in two days.
Waiting to hear back from you.
Yours sincerely,
Tirth ThakkarSubmitted by tirththakkar23 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single clear idea to maintain coherence. Introducing, explaining, and concluding each concept clearly can enhance your writing's effectiveness.
Task Response
For even clearer task achievement, elaborate on how the jacket's issue affects its usability or its significance to your brother to further justify your dissatisfaction and request.
General Improvement
Though your letter maintains a polite and appropriate tone, varying your sentence structure more and employing a wider range of expressions could enrich your letter's quality.