in many countries a small number of people earn extremly high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but other think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Give your opinion.

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Nowadays, it is normal to notice that a minority of the
population
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have
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has
a high
salary
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comparing
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comparison
comparable
to the others. Certain person
believe
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believes
that it gives a better image of the country, whereas others think that
government
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should give a range of
salary
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. In my opinion, the issue does not come from the minority of people who are rich, but from equality of lifestyle condition between the
population
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. In
this
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essay I will discuss both views and give
reason
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a reason
reasons
of my
pointview
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point view
.
First
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of all,
government
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should not
limitate
reproduce someone's behavior or looks
imitate
the range of
salary
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to a certain level, but gives a minimum who allow people to live correctly. Indeed, there is a divergence in life condition and it gives a certain image to the country.
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, many inhabitant have the possibility to rent or buy a house, it becomes common for people to accept that a small part of the
population
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still sleep in the street because they do not have enough money to rent a flat. According to the professor Emile in his article for the CNRS they are more people in the street than people rich. In fact, rich people represent only 3% of the
population
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,
comparing
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compared
to poor persons who represent over 6%. I believe that the
government
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should not limit the
salary
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to a certain range, but give a minimum and help these people financially by reducing the cost of habitat.
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, "money does not buy happiness" living correctly and being capable to feed its family should be enough.
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, law and tax should be applied for all the
population
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. People who earn the most are often the people who control public finance.
Government
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instore
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law and take from people, many tax for diverse reason,
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as education and health.
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, generally, these people do not have to pay for any of these taxes and their income are traditionally higher than the rest of the inhabitants.
For example
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, the president earns 24 thousand per month and does not have to pay for his house or food.
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, he
can has
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can have
luxury advantage like travel by jet.
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, I am sure that if
government
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start to limit income to a certain level they will not do it for
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
because of the numerous advantages. In conclusion, the main issue is not the rich person, but social right and living condition. On one hand, laws and taxes have to be applied by everyone without any exception because of their social position.
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,
government
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should help poor people by giving them a
salary
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who allow them to live correctly.
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