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In the past, when students did a University degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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It is true that in today's
era most
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era, most
 of the students are going to foreign countries for their education.
This
 essay will discuss
pros
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the pros
 and cons of the above notion. On the one hand, there are merits for a person to study in International University.
Firstly
, a person gets
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
 to explore
world
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the world
, meet people from different cultures and widen
horizon
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the horizon
 of thinking with different prospectives of people around them.
Secondly
, students can take benefit of different technical equipment which are available in other countries
.
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.
Finally
,
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,
when a person
go
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goes
 to another
country
 for
develpos
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develops
 overall personality and become easy for them to work with International countries and earn desirable money.
However
, there are demerits for
an
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a
country
who's
of which person?
whose
 young generation is going
in
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into
to
 another
country
. To start with,
this
 trend
deprive
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deprives
 a
nation
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nation's
 education system. More than that, talented students go in another
country
 they study there and in most of the cases they never come back.
For example
 CEO of Google is Sundar Pichai, an Indian so if he would not have gone America Google could have been in India.
Furthermore
,
this
 trend increases hard working students how to prepare for exams like ILETS
,
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,
PTET rather, IIT and AIIMS which is
great loss
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a great loss
 of Indian institutes. In conclusion
,
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,
going
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to
 International University has advantages in personal
life but
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life, but
 it has disadvantages on
National level
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a National level
.
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