some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society, while others believe that children should learn that inn school.

The world is changing and moving rapidly fast, people are conscious of what they do and the way they act in the
society
. Parents are the
first
ch
ildrens t
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child's
children
children's
eachers,
this
is because fr
om t
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of
by
he time a
child
is bo
ught i
take something or somebody with oneself somewhere
brought
n
to t
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
he world to about the age of 4 years, depending on the country's starting age time,
ch
ild i
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the child
a child
s under the parents. Psychologist be
lieve t
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believes
hat a ch
ilds b
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child's
child
rain develops and start maturing at
this
stay. At
this
stay, the
child
starts to di
stinque b
(often followed by 'from') not alike; different in nature or quality
distinct
distance
etween good and evil. The parents st
arts t
Suggestion
start
o teach the
child
how to be good and what not to do. At
this
stage the only people th
atthe c
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that the
h
ilds k
a young person of either sex
children
child
nows are the parents, they help to sh
apen t
make sharp or sharper
sharpen
shape
he ch
ilds a
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child's
ttitude. Another
school
of ta
ught b
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
elieves that the
school
is a place where the
child
learns how to be good in the
society
. The
child
in
tracts w
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in tracts
ith other students from different home. In
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At
this
stage, the teachers are responsible in helping the children become better in the
society
. In conclusion, the idea that children being good in the
society
should be left in the hands of the parents or the
school
is not fully supported. Both the parents and the
school
have their role to play in the life of a
child
.
Therefore
, the making of a
child
to be good to the
society
is not only the work of the parents neither of the
school
, they have a co
ntributions i
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contribution
n shaping the life of a
child
.

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