some people prefer to live in a house,while others feel tjat there are more advantages to living in an apartment.Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with livinv in an apartment ? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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There is no doubt that due to increased urbanisation housing has become a major problem
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A few individuals choose to
luve
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
in a
house
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while others prefer to live in an
apartment
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This
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and I will tend to agree with the latter view. One of the most significant
benefit
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benefits
of living in a
house
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is privacy. People enjoy free space
such
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as large rooms
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car parking and garden. They argue that they can build and design the
house
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as per their
concenience
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
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However
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living in an own
house
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brings in
extra cost
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the extra cost
of
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
maintaining
and
lot
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a lot
lots
of care is needed and is not much suitable for
nuclear family
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the nuclear family
nuclear families
a nuclear family
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it is a fact that the
apartment
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concept is nowadays widely accepted by the society.So its benefits cannot be ignored.
For instance
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the
maintainance
activity involved in maintaining something in good working order
maintenance
is taken care of by the society.There is a helpline number on that you can make
call
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calls
regarding any issue you are facing
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Residing in an
apartment
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offers you many recreational activities in bonus
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as swimming, gym
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Individuals dwelling
their
in or at that place
there
does not have
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do not have
any tension regarding child safety due to 24×7 security ensured in societies.
In contrast
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, people living in
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apartment face
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the apartment face
some problems
such
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as noise from neighbouring houses and parking space
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Evidently
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living in
aprtment
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an apartment
apartment
the apartment
is far more convenient than staying in individual houses
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In conclusion
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although
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own houses have
privacy but
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privacy, but
positive aspects
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the positive aspects
of apartments do outweigh them
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In my view
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it is comfortable to stay in apartments after viewing its advantages.

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