rich countries should aallow jobs for skilled and knowlegeable employers who are from poor coutries. Do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays,
wealth
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wealthier
countries should give to people whose come from an unfortunate place, the opportunity to
work
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with them. I argued that a graduate person should have the chance to get a
job
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somewhere else, because he does not have
this
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possibility in his own town. In
this
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essay, I will discuss the question and give several reasons of my point-view.
First
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of all, even if the graduate student had an occupation in his country, he would be under-paid. Indeed, generally, the majority of people who try to immigrate to another country is because they could not feed their family and lived in good ways. The only one solution for them is to move out.
For example
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, after the "spring revolution" in Tunisia, the lifestyle changed a lot and the majority of people didn't have a
work
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. So, many young men decided to immigrate in
Europe where
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Europe, where
the salary was better and the policy more
respectfull
full of or exhibiting respect
respectful
of its inhabitants.
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, with
the vague
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the vagueness
the vaguest
of immigration in Europe, particularly in France it becomes a polemic to receive people. They decided to close their
border
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borders
and to
expulse
expose or make accessible to some action or influence
expose
actual residents even if they had a
job
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.
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, I believe that rich countries,
such
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as countries from Europe
gives
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give
are given
the chance to these people to
work
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and just ask them why they are here. Perhaps, they will open their eyes and see that the
sight
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
site
is not pink all around the
world
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.
Moreover
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,
however
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, countries from the "North" should help the "South" to develop their economy
instead
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to exploit them. Traditionally, the south
are
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is
in charge to cultivate crops and feed the
world
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. They do not have the capacity of developing their system because of the North who exploit their resources by buying their exploitation in an under-price.
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, Mexico is the main
productor
someone who makes predictions of the future (usually on the basis of special knowledge)
predictor
product or
producer
of meat in the
world
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, but are considered like poor by the rest of the
world
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. The majority of inhabitants live with a low income. I am sure that they can live in
better way
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a better way
if others from the North gave them the opportunity to
work
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with more
respectfull
full of or exhibiting respect
respectful
conditions or by stopping to take their production with limit a free price.
Thus
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, people will stop to immigrate and ask for a
job
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somewhere else if they stop to take their resources
unrespectfully
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. In conclusion, since a
decenny
socially or conventionally correct; refined or virtuous
decent
many people start to leave their town to look at for a
job
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, because they cannot find it in their location. The main reasons of
this
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tragedy are on the one hand, because people are under-paid in their own country and
on the other hand
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, they live in a
worth
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worthily
condition.
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