You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, modern technology has increased considerably. Time and effort saving devices
such
as dishwashers and communication tools
such
as computers and laptops have made life even easier and comfortable. In
this
essay, I will discuss the problems and suitable solutions of these modern devices. Technology has gone up to a whole new level. Today, dishwashers and computers are
become
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becoming
necessary in every house. Every house has
atleast
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at least
one of these.
Although
, dishwashers save a lot of time and effort of mankind, it has somehow made a person lazy. The invention of computers was considered a boom
to
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in
of
technology until people started getting addicted to social networking sites.
For example
, if a person hosts a party for 40-50 people, dishwashers are considered to be a blessing, as it helps clean the dishes faster and without much effort.
Similarly
, for computers, people can connect to far away relatives faster through the Internet.
However
, all dishes cannot be put in the dishwasher, some need to be washed by hand as well. If people learn to limit the use of computers, it will be helpful for them. In today’s world, every
second
person experiences stress, be it children or adults. Another problem of dishwashers is that, it sometimes doesn’t wash properly and sometimes it breaks glass plates and bowls. Increased use of computers can lead to damaged eyesight. Too much screen time should be avoided.
For instance
, Children at a very young age have spectacles due to computers and mobile phones. Steel
cannot be put
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cannot put
in the dishwasher; it will automatically stop working or may get spoilt. The only solutions to these problems are
to
being one more than one
two
wash vessels by hand and limit the use of computers. If all
this
is followed, it will indirectly lead to less stress and happier lives. In conclusion, despite the various problems associated with these modern devices, people cannot avoid them and their existing because they are so used to them, that they think they cannot do without them.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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