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All children should study a foreign language, starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement ?

#children #study #language #grades
Learning a foreign
language
 is very useful nowadays because all of ministries and companies really need the person who can speak
,
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,
 read, listen and write in other languages. Many people believe that enrolling their children to the English or other
language
school
 can help their children more clever and it might help them in the future. In our world, there are more than 4000 languages that have spoken by different natives or countries. But there are the top 5 languages that have been spoken by a lot of people in the world
such
 as English, French, Mandarin, Hindi, Spanish. A large number of individuals consider that most of parents nowadays like to enrol their children to English
school
 or Mandarin
school
. The numerous of schools
also
 increase from days to days. Most of them are English and Mandarin
school
.
For instance
, in Cambodia, the number of students enrolled in young ages in the English
school
 has more than 10000 students a year. It keeps increasing every year.
However
, it was said that enrolling the children in the foreign
language
school
 in the early grades might affect their children's native
language
.
This
 could count as a concern too, because nowadays we can see that some of children cannot speak their native
language
 at all. There are other people think if we want to enrol our children to another
language
school
, we should make them learn their native
language
first
. In conclusion, parents should let their children study another accent, but they
also
 have to be aware about their children as if they can speak their native
language
 yet. It might be easier if they study
abroad but
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abroad, but
 it will cause them the consequences if they can't speak their own
language
 in own country. In my opinion, I think that enrolling your children to foreign
language
school
 is a good choice, but we should let them learn their own
language
first
.
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