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Playing a game is fun only when you win. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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Nowadays there are many ways for people to get fun and spend their
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 with satisfaction.
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,
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 is an opinion that the only way to get pleasure from games is a victory. Personally, I strongly disagree with
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 statement, so let’s consider some of the reasons in the following essay.
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, people are able to learn something new when they are playing games.
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, players can use tricky ways of playing as well as unusual skills that can completely change the situation on a
game
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 field. One should note here that kids often play football in
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 way. Some of teens may have bad skills
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in
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 sport, but they are always taught by their teammates who demonstrate techniques and important abilities which allow to play better.
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, children always spend
time
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 together playing the
game
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 or just practicing doing something related to it and with some amount of jokes it becomes the funniest way of spending
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.
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, games allow to find new friends.
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, some adults prefer to play in order to get some social interaction and communication. In
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 case, people gather together
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in
 some places and talk with each other while participating in a cardboard
game
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. During that
time
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 friends tell interesting stories, share secrets and,
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, make new friends.
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, it allows players to have a wide range of colleagues who always ready to meet and discuss new news or other interesting stuff despite that a
game
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 is not a main reason for the meeting. To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that games are able to make us happy not only when we win, but almost every
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.
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 is because we can learn how to play and we get a portion of social interaction.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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