BY PUNISHING MURDERERS WITH THE DEATH PENALTY, SOCIETY IS ALSO GUILTY OF COMMITTING MURDER. THEREFORE LIFE IN PRISON IS BETTER PUNISHMENT FOR MURDERERS. TO WHAT EXTENT SO YOU AGREE OF DISAGREE.

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In recent years there has been a considerable rise in criminal activities. It is a common belief, that common people are committing the same
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as the murderer by giving them a death sentence.
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, should be given life imprisonment. In
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essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic.
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and foremost, there should be a strong investigation prior to the sentence. Most of the time, the guilty might have no criminal background and was never involved in any criminal activities.
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, sometimes people do hurt others in order to save themselves or someone from getting hurt.
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, they call medical emergencies and make every possible attempt to save the person. They should be given a little forgiveness and should not be treated like a real criminal.
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, the common people would be saved from committing a
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by hanging someone who had no intention of a
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.
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, the criminal who has motives behind a
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are the one's the law needs to deal in a harsh manner. Those are the perpetrators, society should be scared of. They are not fit enough to live in a society and should be given the death penalty.
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, there have been cases where people feel happy in killing someone. They enjoy the suffering of other people and won't stop after killing one person.
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, the prison has limited space and no tax payers money should be used to feed people like them.
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. Anyone who kills with a motive, should be hanged. In conclusion. Despite murderers being kept in prison are fed by tax payers. In my view, anyone who has committed a
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unintentionally doesn't deserve to be treated the same as one with motives and their cases should be given little leniency.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • capital punishment
  • irreversible
  • deterrence
  • rehabilitation
  • human rights
  • ethical dilemma
  • state-sponsored
  • vindicate
  • incarceration
  • due process
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