more people decided to have childreb in their later age than in the past, why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages ?
Nowadays, it becomes current for people to have an offspring later than
few years
ago. Many reasons are behind Suggestion
a few years
this
new practice. In consequence, advantages and disadvantages will be outlined in Linking Words
this
essay.
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First
of all, work and travel are the main benefits. Indeed, Linking Words
contrarly
to our ancestor who didn't have the chance to go to school. The new generation very opposed in nature or character or purpose
contrary
contrarily
central
have
the opportunity to have a job directly after being graduated. In Suggestion
has
this
case, they generally prefer to report the time for a juvenile in order to be more focus in their work. Linking Words
Moreover
, without children, it is Linking Words
most simple
to travel around the world and discover a new culture. I fact, they can Suggestion
simpler
more simple
also
do it with an infant, but without it they can feel more free and less preoccupied. According to my own experience, Linking Words
for instance
, I decided to have a child around 40 years old because I would Linking Words
liKe
to have the capacity to realise prefer or wish to do something
like
liked
dream
, Suggestion
a dream
the dream
such
as go to America or be graduated before to share my life with my children.
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However
, to have a baby make people feel Linking Words
complited
. It is a privilege to have one and become parents. So, have an infant late does not give them the opportunity to live with them for a long time. For having every necessary or normal part or component or step
complete
complicated
completed
this
reason, it is preferable to have a child around 30 years old and spend the time before for Linking Words
traveling
and the act of going from one place to another
travelling
builting
their professional life. To give an example, it is possible to quote the professor a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
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in his article for the CNRS gives some statistics about the situation. Almost, 30% of the parents who have an offspring late (around 40 years old) lived only 20 years with them.
In conclusion, to have a juvenile late could be on a one hand, the chance for people to work and go outside the country without being preoccupied Accept comma addition
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by
someone else. Suggestion
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On the other hand
, they cannot live with them enough. If it is managed properly, Linking Words
advantages
could outweigh drawbackSuggestion
the advantages
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...