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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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When it comes to personality, people concluded it by genes before the birth of the baby and after that, there is no factor which changes our characters. I disagree
with
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to
 a large extent it can be
discussed in the
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discussed further in the
further
 paragraph. Focusing on the factor which changes the individual characteristics, the foremost on is that parents should teach their children how to behave with family members and society,
for instance
, the parents teach the
child to how to
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child how to
 talk with an elder
person
 the child must be remembered it for a lifetime.
Secondly
, Education alters the change in an
individuals
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individual's
 attitude which only understand by the literate
person
,
such
 as a well-educated
person
know
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knows
 his responsibility as well as a good civilized.
In addition
, Society is playing a pivotal role in building characteristic in
someone
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someone's
someones
 life,
for example
, in many societies, boys are more important than girls, Namely, the girls would be scolded by their family members or her in-
lows
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law's
-family. To add another reason is that the
person
 learn many things from their life experiences, in
this
 case, the
person
refuse
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refuses
 to argue with that
person
 who doesn't accept their mistakes.
Moreover
, the
person
 learns
such
 things from their friends if their friends addicted to bad habits like a cigarette, alcohol
then
 the
person
also
 intake that beverage.
However
, I'm not neglecting the downside, many actions or language in offspring have in heritage, in the example of, the
person
 always speaks the truth and
also
 never theft any things no matter what the situation is there. To conclude and it can be eventually started that the gene is not only responsible for the development of the layman
personality but
Accept comma addition
personality, but
also
 other attributes like culture, society, friends, education
also
 contribute to the role to the growth of personality.
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