Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travellers?

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At present, an increasing number of people are travelling than they were in the past.
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is because of advances in the means of transportation, providing an unlimited opportunity for people to explore different places and expand their mindset. Over the past few years, there have been several developments witnessed in the transportation industry, specifically air travel.
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has not only made travel safe and convenient, but
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economical. Nowadays millions of flights everyday cover thousands of mile distances to reach almost every corner of the world.
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, in the 1950s, when travelling from South Asia to London on the ship took months to reach the destination, but now it is just a matter of hours via
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, travelling offers a chance for people to explore not only new places, but
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also allow
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also allows
them to learn about new people, their lifestyle, their language, their culture and values, and their history.
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enormous opportunity to learn so many new things, opens people's mind and reconcile their perceptions about them with reality.
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, people in the west, have
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perception created via the media about Pakistan that it is a terrorist country, and it's not safe to go there. When some of them visited Pakistan and they were amazed by not only the beauty of the country
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itself, but
the hospitality of its people as well.
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made them realize that what they see
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the media or heard from others is quite the opposite. In conclusion, a large number of people are travelling today than they were in the past, due to the developments in the transportation means and can explore different places and reconcile their perceptions with reality.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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