Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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A substantial number of people who
are they always attempt
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are they always attempting
are they always attempt
to sustain their lifestyles and habits in a certain way.They do not have any eager to engage with new adventure.But there are some people who have a strong feelings on their arguments.In my opinion, changing is a vital part of human life.So people need to get in touch with new things.Both sides will be discussed before drawing a reasonable conclusion.
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the one hand, a good number of people who are they used to do some things during their entire life.
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my uncle, he is a businessman
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I asked him to do something new but he refused because he used to in business.
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people by nature believe the same ways doing things it is more convenient for them.
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when people are to change their jobs,
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transition has given them much worries as to whether they are going to get what type of jobs or what type of people would be his colleagues.
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hand most
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hand, most
of the people are convinced that people should not confine them in a certain area.
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, there is more satisfaction to
triumphant something
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triumphant, something
new.
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my brother
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he was a manager of a
hotel but
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hotel, but
now he is a chief
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a lay judge or civil authority who administers the law (especially one who conducts a court dealing with minor offenses)
magistrate
.That had been possible only for his strong desire.
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if people restrain themselves in a job
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the mobility of the society will hamper.The development would not be possible for the country.
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a great number of changes do us good.In many cases, we may find that changes make us stronger
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more mature and experienced. To Conclude
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in my point of view
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change is inevitable in human life.But that would have to be the best deal.
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to a very great extent or degree
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that people
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will not have
to suffer in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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