Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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Most of the people across the globe, believe enormous amount of time is devoted to gain theoretical knowledge rather than hand-on skills. I totally agree with

this

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statement, and believe practical exposure is more important than academic capability. At present, most of the universities follow

traditional pattern

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traditional patterns

the traditional pattern

a traditional pattern

of teaching. The syllabus

mainly focusses

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mainly focuses

on conceptual learning and slot for

useful practical

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useful, practical

ability is very less.

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, an engineering course is totally

technical

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technically

oriented, but pattern of teaching gives less emphasis to gain active skills.

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, it’s peak time to make an amendment in the method of coaching.

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, due to poor educational structure, many students are unable to get employment. Indeed, it’s true that

world

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the world

is heading rapidly toward skill oriented era. Now,

organization

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the organization

is giving more weightage to cognitive capability than college qualification.

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to that, a profound mastery will pave the way for a better career and widen the horizon of thinking. All these advantages of experimental education cannot be snubbed when it comes to shape the career of a student. To conclude, a school must include non-theoretical study in the course of education, which will contribute to a major extent to erect a bright career for

pupil

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pupils

the pupil

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

202 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

dual learning systems
theoretical knowledge
practical application
project-based learning
real-world scenarios
retention
soft skills
communication
teamwork
problem-solving
curriculum
fact memorization
integrate technology
coding
digital literacy
assessment methods
portfolios
practical demonstrations

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Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large city. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?