It’s been seen that reading for pleasure develops imaginations and better language skills than to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There has been more and more public concerns about the benefits of reading in comparison

with

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watching television. Personally, I completely disagree with the view that reading is much better in one’s imagination and

language

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development because I consider both leisure activities have their own distinctive advantages. On the one hand, there are several reasons supporting the view that reading habit could put positive effects on individual imaginative mind and

language

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ability. The principle benefits, perhaps, is that reading intriguing books and magazines might boost readers’ lexical resources and grammatical accuracy, which play a crucial role in linguistic expertise,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

writing skill and reading speed. One English learner,

for instance

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, could be good at the dominant

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by reading more novels or newspapers written in English.

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, the significant advantage in terms of imagination development is that thought-provoking books can stimulate brain’s imagining processes. A good example is that fans of the well-known book series called Harry Potter said drew different images of Hogwarts’ architecture when asked.

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, I would

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believe that watching TV might result in a great deal of self-improvement, especially

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achievement and creativity.

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, television is a source of recreational and educational programmes which provides a variety of useful information for enhancing listening and speaking skills. In fact, some programmes

such

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as foreign films, music shows or

talkshows

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talk shows

may help viewers improve their pronunciation by

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amounting to a large indefinite number

numerous

techniques like shadowing or deep listening when they learn languages other than their mother tongues. Regarding imagination,

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

benefits of watching television

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are

that audiences’ thoughts about the subjects described in books could be consolidated vividly. By watching the adaptations of Harry Potter,

for example

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, readers may affirm their expectations about the magical atmosphere and context as well as the

apprearances

outward or visible aspect of a person or thing

appearance

appearances

of their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

characters. In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, it seems advisable that reading should be effectively coupled with watching appropriate TV programmes in order to develop imaginations and

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abilities because both

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Freetime

freedom

pursuits can create

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an improvement

improvements

in their own ways.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

341 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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