You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

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Dear Dave, Hope

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letter finds you in

radiat

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radiant

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health and

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best of spirits. I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am moving to Lahore from Islamabad because of landing a new job. Let me tell you in detail. You may have

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that I was searching for

a better job opportunities

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week I got a call from a prestigious telecom company to join as a finance manager with better perks and

privilges

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privileges

. I am glad to tell you that I am going to join

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organization in a new city. As you told me you are looking to rent a house in my city because of your job placement. I'm glad to tell you that you can hire my current

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am leaving

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week. It is a

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flat with attached bathrooms.

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, there is a large kitchen and a drawing room for guests. I would like to suggest it

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because

it is not only near to your new office but

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located in

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city

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, there is a range of international

resturaunts

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nearby and a huge supermarket.

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, it would be better for you to move without a delay. I look forward to hearing from you! Yours lovingly, Farrukh

Submitted by farrukh.maqsood on Tue Dec 03 2019

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

215 words

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