You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

Dear Dave, Hope
this
letter finds you in
radiat
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radiant
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health and
the
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best of spirits. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I am moving to Lahore from Islamabad because of landing a new job. Let me tell you in detail. You may have
know
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that I was searching for
a better job opportunities
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better job opportunities
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.
Fortunatley
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Fortunately
,
the
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last
week I got a call from a prestigious telecom company to join as a finance manager with better perks and
privilges
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privileges
. I am glad to tell you that I am going to join
this
organization in a new city. As you told me you are looking to rent a house in my city because of your job placement. I'm glad to tell you that you can hire my current
appartment
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apartment
as
i
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am leaving
this
week. It is a
two bedroom
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flat with attached bathrooms.
In addition
, there is a large kitchen and a drawing room for guests. I would like to suggest it
beacuse
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because
it is not only near to your new office but
also
located in
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city
center
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.
Moreover
, there is a range of international
resturaunts
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restaurants
nearby and a huge supermarket.
Therefore
, it would be better for you to move without a delay. I look forward to hearing from you! Yours lovingly, Farrukh
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