some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It’s argued by
few individuals
that unpaid facilities to human beings are mandatory at secondary Suggestion
a few individuals
school
Use synonyms
education
(like, working for Use synonyms
welfare
, betterment for a particular area or training for youngster’s in the physical Suggestion
the welfare
education
). In my opinion I strongly supported the idea that voluntary services must be added in the Use synonyms
school
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level
to serving the community.
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First
of all, in Linking Words
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last decades
, with the impact of growing globalization, it’s noticed significant positive Suggestion
the last decades
affect
in the economy of the world, whereas a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
this
increasing population and day by day globe challenges brings negative aspects in the terms of inflation which affected poor nations. Regarding raise the poor nations, a plethora of welfare schemes Linking Words
are introduced
to support them. Suggestion
is introduced
For example
, in Africa and South Asia a lot of people are surviving for food, health and Linking Words
education
. So, adding these voluntary schemes will be very helpful from childhood to learn in the crucial situation, Use synonyms
education
is a key tool to bring change Use synonyms
to
building nations. Suggestion
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need to start some sort of development programmes which should be Linking Words
monitor
by Suggestion
monitored
charity but
more often Accept comma addition
charity, but
non profit
based merely more help and support an organization chartered for other than profit-making activities
nonprofit
by
Government will enough.
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of
Secondly
, it’s important to look into Linking Words
this
before start of social activities in the Linking Words
school
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level
, they need to hire a trained staff in the specific field whether Use synonyms
this
would be an extra cost on the budget. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Linking Words
student
must be well prepared mentally to face Suggestion
students
a student
this
situation of extra work load. Linking Words
Moreover
, physical activities are Linking Words
also
important for the youngsters from Linking Words
school
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level
to grow mentally Use synonyms
as well physically,
it would be very helpful to give training for fitness point of view, Suggestion
as well as physically,
otherwise
the children will be more attractive in indoor activities, like Linking Words
use
to play games on computer or electronic devices. The objective case of we, the persons speaking
us
Consequently
, they may lose interest in doing those kinds of sports.
In conclusion, I agreed that unpaid community services are mandatory to add in secondary Linking Words
school
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level
to serving better as there are numerous advantages to carrying out community services. Our nation will continue to prosper and flourish if there are more well-educated individual raised.Use synonyms
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