Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by many people that exercise is the play a vital role in our whole life while others think that a protein rich
diet
is a more essential for us.In my opinion
,
Accept space
,
I believe that exercise is a backbone of a healthy
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
while balance
diet
is the basic building blocks of
human
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the human body
body
. On the one hand, Every corner of world people
think
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thinks
that they become look to be smart and healthy, so they manage their time from
tuff
Suggestion
Tuff
routine to
joined
Suggestion
join
gyms and
rehabilation
the restoration of someone to a useful place in society
rehabilitation
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
because they realize that
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
fiscal
fitnass
the quality of being suitable
fitness
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for health, despite, that most people
buzy
obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
on their daily work schedule so they have no extra time to do
exerecise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
exercises
properly whereas
yougester
a young person of either sex
youngster
have enough time do
such
activities like tennis, football, hockey and Cricket to boost their stamina as well as
mentaliy
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mental
mentality
mentally
monthly
approach.
On the other hand
, It is necessary for the locomotion for our
body
to take rich
minerls
solid homogeneous inorganic substances occurring in nature having a definite chemical composition
minerals
mineral
and carbohydrates because proteins and amino acids are made of the cells and they combine
to
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with
each other and build a perfect human
Stracuture
a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structure
.
there
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There
are
lot
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lots
of diseases occurs due to the
defiency
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
of trace minerals
such
as
Anemia
a deficiency of red blood cells
anaemia
,
Osteoporsis
abnormal loss of bony tissue resulting in fragile porous bones attributable to a lack of calcium; most common in postmenopausal women
osteoporosis
, rickets, blindness, low iron and bone marrow disease
,
Accept space
,
despite, these
type
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types
of medical
problemes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
, other abnormalities
also
risen.
Finally
,
Accept space
,
In my opinion, whether
focus
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a focus
on
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
activities
,
Accept space
,
intake high
caloric
Suggestion
calorie
diet
in daily home
manu
a list of dishes available at a restaurant
menu
many
manual
and set a particular target of your
body
requirment
required activity
requirement
requirements
.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, it
also
depands
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depends
depend
on the family finance. In Conclusion, getting a good life style it should
neccesary
absolutely essential
necessary
to build a
body
to talk daily
proteins
Suggestion
protein
rich
diet
either join
fitness club
Suggestion
a fitness club
.
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