Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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diet
is a more essential for us.In my opinionUse synonyms
,
I believe that exercise is a backbone of a healthy Accept space
,
life style
while balance a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
diet
is the basic building blocks of Use synonyms
human
Suggestion
the human body
body
.
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think
that they become look to be smart and healthy, so they manage their time from Suggestion
thinks
tuff
routine to Suggestion
Tuff
joined
gyms and Suggestion
join
rehabilation
the restoration of someone to a useful place in society
rehabilitation
centers
because they realize that an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
Centers
physcial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
fiscal
fitnass
the quality of being suitable
fitness
benefical
for health, despite, that most people promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
buzy
on their daily work schedule so they have no extra time to do obtain by purchase; acquire by means of a financial transaction
buy
exerecise
properly whereas the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
exercises
yougester
have enough time do a young person of either sex
youngster
such
activities like tennis, football, hockey and Cricket to boost their stamina as well as Linking Words
mentaliy
approach.
Suggestion
mental
mentality
mentally
monthly
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body
to take rich Use synonyms
minerls
and carbohydrates because proteins and amino acids are made of the cells and they combine solid homogeneous inorganic substances occurring in nature having a definite chemical composition
minerals
mineral
to
each other and build a perfect human Suggestion
with
Stracuture
.a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structure
there
are Suggestion
There
lot
of diseases occurs due to the Suggestion
lots
defiency
of trace minerals the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
deficiency
such
as Linking Words
Anemia
, a deficiency of red blood cells
anaemia
Osteoporsis
, rickets, blindness, low iron and bone marrow diseaseabnormal loss of bony tissue resulting in fragile porous bones attributable to a lack of calcium; most common in postmenopausal women
osteoporosis
,
despite, these Accept space
,
type
of medical Suggestion
types
problemes
, other abnormalities a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
also
risen.
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Finally
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,
In my opinion, whether Accept space
,
focus
on Suggestion
a focus
physcial
activitiesinvolving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
,
intake high Accept space
,
caloric
Suggestion
calorie
diet
in daily home Use synonyms
manu
and set a particular target of your a list of dishes available at a restaurant
menu
many
manual
body
Use synonyms
requirment
.required activity
requirement
requirements
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furthermore
, it in addition
Furthermore
also
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depands
on the family finance.
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depends
depend
neccesary
to build a absolutely essential
necessary
body
to talk daily Use synonyms
proteins
rich Suggestion
protein
diet
either join Use synonyms
fitness club
.Suggestion
a fitness club
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