Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together

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It is believed that
music
is the best manner to relate different nations, older and youth together. I agree with
this
notion, and in
this
essay, I will give some reasons in
favor
promote over another
favour
to support my perspective. Frist and formats, I think that
music
play
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plays
an essential role in our
life
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lives
. They are many kinds of
music
such
as
classic
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classical
, rap and rock. The young and older usually argue in many aspects of
life
;
however
, the
music
can combine them together.
For example
, my grandparents and I like to listen classical songs of Abdalhalim Hafez who is
popular singer
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a popular singer
in 90th century.
Furthermore
, when I was
baby
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a baby
my mother played some songs to sleep me;
although
, I did not understand anything yet.
Secondly
, another reason why I support
this
notion is that
music
reflects the culture of the countries. So that when you listen to
alternatives
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alternative
tunes, you will know others cultures.
For instance
, I frequently enjoy listening to the famous American Singer Called Michel Jackson;
however
, I do not know English. As
result
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a result
, I learn
this
foreign language. It is
also
can say that
music
relaxes
persons especially
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persons, especially
from
stress
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the stress
and pressure of
life
.
For instance
, some physicians use melody to calm their patients. In conclusion, I completely agree with the thought that melody vital task in our
life
.
In addition
to
this
it is
consider
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considered
as
abridge
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a bridge
to connect cultures and generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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