Write a letter to a friend who you have met on an overseas trip in an English speaking country. Ask for him to send you the trips photographs.

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Dear Dave, Hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing
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letter to ask request you to send me the photographs which we took
last
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week on
trip
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a trip
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to England. It was really a memorable visit for us. I was really excited about it and
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am really happy
how
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with how
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it turned out. For
me
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the best part of
trip
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the trip
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was visiting the heritage museum and salam Mall. I am glad that we captured our moments of joy thanks to your 40
mega
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megapixel
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pixel
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pixels
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sonay
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sony
digital camera. I hope that you have already developed selected pictures digitally ,
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, send me a soft copy
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my email address [email protected]. Could you please tell me that you framed our which pictures
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Please
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suggest
me
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to me
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that
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which one will be suitable for me to hang on my bedroom wall. Hoping to receive photographs soon!
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