The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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who
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Swedan
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, at nearly 7.5% of the total and 5 % respectively.
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