The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the trend of
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aging
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population
, specifically
people
who
65
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and above, from 1940 to 2040 in the
USA
,
Swedan
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Sweden
and
Japan
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of elderly
people
is predicted to
be increase
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significantly over
the
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time period.
Further
,
Japan
had
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less proportion of senior
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citizens
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in 1940 when compared to
other
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two countries,
however
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this
pattern is forecasted to change in 2040 when
Japan
will be overtook the
USA
and
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Sweden
.
According to
the graph, in 1940, around 10% of the total
population
in America consisted
with
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people
who
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aged 65 years or more and
this
was followed by
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Sweden
and
Japan
, at nearly 7.5% of the total and 5 % respectively. With
the
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time, the percentage of the
aging
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population
was
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fluctuated until around 1996 in
Swedan
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Sweden
and the
USA
and
then
,
Swedan
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Sweden
exceeded the
USA
in nearly 1997. Apart from the few expected fluctuation,
Swedan
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Sweden
will be expected to have 25% of elderly
people
in 2040. Meanwhile,
Japan
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a minimal up and down, and plateau trend until 2000 and
thereafter
, the predicted proportion will be substantially climbed up and reached
to
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just above 25% in 2040. The least number of
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aging
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population
will be in the
USA
in 2040 , at nearly 22%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, people, usa, swedan, japan with synonyms.
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