Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Incompatibility

with the

world

development, the number of dollars billionaires and millionaires has proliferated considerably.

Nevertheless

, whether those rich individuals should offer a helping chance for other people has triggered a heated debate. From my point of view, I totally agree with the argument that expenditure should be spent to aid other persons.

First it

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First, it

is obvious that helping people by multifarious means could bridge the gap between rich and poor. More clearly, those funds raised by those generous patrons have a bearing on impoverished

individuals especially

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individuals, especially

in the developing countries to overcome their poverty by

provide

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providing

them with foods or fundamental aids.

Furthermore

, the money is

also

being allocated to help them

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seek

to seek

for a job or equipping them with equipment and techniques to

do

engage in

make

a vocation.

Therefore

, they are able to make a profit and feed themselves.

Moreover

, a lion’s share of funds from those billionaires helps to make the

world

better by confronting with some of the hottest problems

such

as eliminating HIV and raising educational status quo in

such

poor countries.

For instance

, it is true that medical

aids including

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aids, including

some specialized drugs are working their job efficiently to eradicate the spread of HIV in Africa.

In addition

, other large fractures of aids are being provided to build

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schools

, buying books and pay for volunteer teachers in some of the deserted areas.

Thus

, more and more poor or unreachable people might have

chance

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a chance

the chance

to approach the adequate medical and educational services. In a nutshell, helping others is the greatest way to turn the

world

into a worth-living place. Only doing so can

world

maintain dynamic and sustainable development