Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women

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There is no doubt that gender equality is supported by many people and males and females are considered equal in all walks of life. Others,
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, support the statement that men and women have differences between them which do not allow them to be equal to each other in some professional fields. In my opinion, ladies and gentlemen possess the same mental c
apacity but,
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capacity, but
at the same time, they are biologically and psychologically different and,
therefore
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, some occupations are more appropriate for men and others – for women.
To begin
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with, some professions require physical strength and stamina. Men are stronger and more athletic than women. Their physique makes them preferred choice for occupations
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as roofers, minors or steel workers,
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.
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o not always mean
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does not always mean
that in these fields there are no women h
ired but
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hired, but
the majority of workers are men. For these reasons, some jobs, for which is necessary more physical power, are dominated by men.
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, other occupations demand consideration and emotional approach. Ladies possess these qualities – they are often more sensitive and considerate.
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, they have a social c
onscience which
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conscience, which
helps them to communicate more easily with others. As a consequence, females are more suitable for occupations
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as teachers, social worker and psychologists,
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. And again, there are
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men occupied in these p
rofessions but
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professions, but
ladies outnumber them. For these reasons, some jobs are defined as more reasonable for women. To summarize, the sexes are deemed completely equal in a professional aspect by a few people. Others tend to believe that there are particular jobs which are suitable for men and some occupations which are not proper for women. As far as I am concerned, there are, indeed, occupations which suit females or males better because of the biological and psychological differences between the sexes.
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