Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Affluent nations

have been providing

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have provided

monetary

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to poorer countries since the times immemorial.

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,

poverty

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is still prevailing in many parts of the

world even

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world, even

after getting financial

aid

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from rich nations.

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, a school of thought opines that rich countries should provide other types of

support

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instead

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of monetary help to needy nations.

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essay completely agrees with

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notion because due to the presence of corruption and illiteracy in poorer nation financial

aid

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would not be helpful to eliminate

poverty

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completely.

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with, it must be agreed that corruption is rampant in many underdeveloped nations. In

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case higher authorities and upper level officials take

huge part

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a huge part

of the monetary

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by different corruption methods.

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, nowadays, many newspaper stories have headlines about the corrupt officials who have taken

major part

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a major part

of patronage from other nations.

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, financial

aid

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does not reach to the actual poor people and

poverty

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still exists in

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nations. Providing people with

materials

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the materials

of their daily needs is a better option than providing helping hands in the form of money. Another vital reason of my agreement is that illiteracy is still exists in many developing and underdeveloped countries. Due to

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people are not aware about how to utilize the monetary

support

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in an efficient way. They do not use that

aid

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in a perfect way and consume whole

aid

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in a small interval of time.

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, due to the lack of education people do not know how to start a small scale business with financial help.

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, it would be better, if rich nations provide education to the dwellers of poorer nations.

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would be beneficial for people to start a new business or to secure a good job. In conclusion,

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even after providing financial

support

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by rich nations to impoverished

countries

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country's

poverty

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is still prevailing, it is high time to switch from monetary

support

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to other help. Corruption and lack education are the major reasons which are making results financial

support

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futile. These things need to be addressed

first

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.