At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In many countries, the highest proportion of

population

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the population

is younger people compare to the old people. There are both advantages and disadvantages about

this

issue. In my opinion the

pluspoints

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plus points

of the increasing number of young people are eclipsed by

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its

drawbacks.

Young generation

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The younger generation

Younger generation

Younger generations

can bring about a great number of merits.

First

and foremost, younger people play a vital role in the economy of

country

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the country

a country

. They are healthy and societies need a dynamic workforce. They spend their salaries on housing, doing recreational activities unlike the elderly people who government

should be spend

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should spend

a lot of money for their health problems.

Secondly

, being young people is essential to have a vital and prospectus society because they are full of energy and always

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volunteer to take a part

volunteer take a part

in various festivals and social groups. The

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, being younger assists to fill the gap between countries because they can increase the cross-cultural understanding because they are

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addicted

to surfing in the internet, most of them technologically-literate and they easily socialize with different people in various countries and they are willing to change the traditional thought.

However

, the downside of the increasing people cannot be overlooked.

To begin

with, there are not only a lot of social problems

such

as crime, corruption, addiction

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So on because young people have more energy to commit a crime, but

also

there

are

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is

less job opportunity and if the government do not measure to tackle with

this

problem, they will have social unrest.

Moreover

, society will face with lack of

expert

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expertise

and professional employee in the diverse fields because the most of young people do not have

adequate experiment

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an adequate experiment

. In

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to me that the young generation is crucial to have a dynamic society and they represent the future of the country so the disadvantages of lack of elderly people should not be overrated as the benefits of them are more significant.