You would like a temporary job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people next summer. Write a letter to the organizers of the summer camp. In your letter: explain what sort of job you would like to do describe your personality say what experience and skills you have

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is James Goodbread and I am 25 years old. The reason I am writing
letter is to ask for a temporary job, I just finished college and I am eager to embark on a new endeavor
next summer. I have been following your summer camp activities for some time and I believe it aligns perfectly with my desires and skills The major I just concluded is regarding physical education. I am aware that you offer sports and outdoor activities for children and young people, which is great because
that is
directly related to my passion. With that, I am looking for an opportunity and I would love to be a part of your team seeking to stimulate physical exercises and social interaction within the newer generation of people. I am a great team player and a focused worker, always have been.
, working with children and young people is something I am keen on and have deep experience with. I spent a few years in Canada working beside educational institutions with a clear purpose in mind, to bolster local community well-being; that was a transcending and invaluable experience that I am certain would amplify your capabilities when I am on board. I look forward to hearing from you, feel free to contact me using my phone number. Best Regards, James
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task achievement
Ensure you address all points of the prompt fully. While your enthusiasm and passion are well-conveyed, be more explicit about the type of job you desire and how your skills directly translate to potential roles within the camp.
coherence cohesion
Your letter is structured well, but you could improve by connecting your ideas more explicitly. Use transitional phrases to show the flow from your background to your specific interest in the job, and then onto your relevant experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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