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Which one you think more influence on people from the followings – The knowledge gained from experience or the knowledge gained from books

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Knowledge
 is the key factor of human growth. The primary
source
 of
knowledge
 can be
depened
be contingent upon (something that is elided)
depended
depend
depends
 on books or the practical experiences. People have different opinion on which
source
 is most appropriate
source
 of
knowledge
. The primary
source
 of a child's education are books, children's growth starts with books.As times wore on, they
gain
knowledge
 from infant books to higher secondary books.
Hence
, contribution of
knowledge
 from books is undoubtedly comprehensive. Nowadays,
eduction
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
 pattern has been changed. Education is sharing with some extra features like audio and video clips.It helps to acquire
knowledge
 in
more practical way
Suggestion
a more practical way
.
It
Suggestion
Its
 impacts are more than just reading books. Human memory saves all elements which a human sense
from
Suggestion
of
 the environment. It is
also
 true that most of the
experinences
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
remains
Suggestion
remain
save
Suggestion
saved
 in human memory in inactive state.
Momery
 become more active, if the
experinece
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
 is having more impact on the
momory
something that is remembered
memory
.The hands on activities
gives
Suggestion
give
 the same impact to the memory.Eventually, the
gain
 will be more effective if it goes through some practical experiences as well. It has
also
 true that there is a gap between theoretical
knowledge
 and practical
knowledge
, practical experience minimise the gap.
On the other hand
, hands on cannot be started without reading the theory from the books. Reading books are boring sometimes, so people get
influncened
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
 more to
gain
knowledge
 using practical experiences only. Both are important and dependent for
knowledge
gain
.

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