Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is thought by some that the most effective way to improve
safety
on roads is to reduce the maximum speed limit on
automobile
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an automobile
,
others
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others, however
however
, are of the opinion that there are other favourable ways to achieve
this
. In my opinion, I consider that good roads and proper illumination on major streets are ways to improve
safety
. On the one hand, some people have suggested that a reduction in the maximum speed limit on vehicles can ensure
safety
on roads.
This
is because over speeding is one of the factors that causes
accident
on
roads
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the roads
. Most drivers are reckless when steering either because they are in a hurry to get to
there
of them or themselves
their
destination or due to the influence of alcohol.
As a result
,
accident
are
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is
always difficult to be avoided when a vehicle is on high speed.
For example
, it was reported in
punch newspaper
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the punch newspaper
that 41% of injuries resulting from
accident
in Nigeria are caused by reckless driving.
Hence
,
this
clearly shows why it is suggested that
speed limit
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the speed limit
speed limits
should be reduced.
On the other hand
, certain persons argue that there are more effective ways to achieve road
safety
and I agree.
Firstly
, roads should be repaired and free from
pot holes
a pit or hole produced by wear or weathering (especially in a road surface)
potholes
.
This
can be achieved by ensuring any depression on the road surface caused by either traffic or erosion repaired immediately. The result of
this
will prevent damage to vehicles,
thus
improving
safety
.
Furthermore
, there should be adequate light on major streets and highway.
This
will ensure that car users see
properly especially
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properly, especially
at night, thereby decreasing accidents. To illustrate, a recent research conducted in Abuja revealed that good roads and proper lighting on major streets reduced
accident
by 67%.
Hence
, it is believed that these
alternatives
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alternative
measure
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measures
are better ways to promote road
safety
. To conclude, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that good roads and proper lighting are more effective ways to ensure
safety
of lives and property.
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