Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The advertising subject is so debatable, as whereas it is purpose is to encourage us to buy new things or tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
This
Linking Words
essay will discuss both side views as it is very essential to know the most effective way to get benefit from advertising. Through advertising we get to know about new products like grocery, fashion, music, available flats
Accept space
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
.
as
Suggestion
As
the fast
Suggestion
the fastest
running time now days some people improvise to publish new items to make life easier
such
Linking Words
as grocery: they made new lunch boxes for kids, as its very helpful to the busy parents who drive their children to school. Other side of advertising is letting us buy new items some of them we need and some we do not. It is
the ugliest
Suggestion
the ugly
truth about advertising to lead people to buy goods they do not need as long as they have money. In my opinion advertising is
very helpful way
Suggestion
a very helpful way
to get in touch with the updates in everything that make life more comfortable.
Therefore
Linking Words
, you don’t have to think so much about your options and consume your time. Advertisements improve our lives by keeping us informed about the latest
products
Suggestion
product
developments and the best prices. Advertisements serve a useful purpose.
Submitted by hassan.mansouralimohamed on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • encourage
  • persuade
  • manipulative
  • unnecessary
  • excessive
  • artificial needs
  • desires
  • consumers
  • oversaturation
  • impulse buying
  • financial problems
  • inform
  • educate
  • features
  • benefits
  • innovations
  • raise awareness
  • social issues
  • positive behavior
  • enrich
  • well-being
What to do next:
Look at other essays: