A friend had a new born baby, you have picked up a present for the baby and want to visit to give it to him / her. Write a letter to - Congratulate your friend. - Tell him why you picked up the mentioned present. - Suggest arrangements for the visit.

#friend #baby #visit #arrangements

Dear Sam, I am feeling so happy while writing

this

letter to you. Words cannot describe my happiness and

enthusiasm

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my enthusiasm

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will only settle once I see your newborn. My heartiest congratulations to you and Grace for having

blessed

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been blessed

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with

such

a beautiful daughter. I know you always wanted your

first

baby to be a girl and

god

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God

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has showered you with abundant blessings. I am visiting

week and you would not be surprised to know that I have picked up the same Barbie dress that you had seen in my hometown during your visit. I know you were not able to make your mind

then

, but now that we know it's a girl I have bought it.

Also

, the seller has confirmed that it can be worn by an infant as extreme care is taken while selecting the material quality. It feels odd to request, but would it be feasible for you to book a room for me in Hotel Ritz near your house. Actually, the only number available online seems to be out of service

since

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for

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last

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the last

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two days. Neither, I want to take any risk by not pre-booking my

accomodation

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accommodation

nor want to stay at your house as I know it is already crowded with your

in laws

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in-laws

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. Hoping to see you soon to cherish some good moments to come ahead. Regards, Vicky Amin.

Fri Dec 06 2019

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7 paragraphs

227 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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