People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

An increasing usage of drugs
are going
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is going
around the world.
Although
it is used by various kinds of people for good purpose,
current generation
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the current generation
of young population tend to experiment both legal and illegal drugs, especially at
early stage
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early stages
an early stage
the early stage
of their life. One of the widely argued
reason
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reasons
for
that is
, elder population of the society
,
Accept space
,
such
as parents
,
Accept space
,
relatives and other surroundings, has failed to be a role model for them.
This
essay will discuss why
youth
is addicted to these and their consequences and examine the way of supporting those against
drug
addiction. On the one hand, it is certainly true that addiction of drugs has
spreaded
distribute or disperse widely
spread
among the
youth
because of the bad guidance which has been offered through
media
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the media
. Having said that,
media
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the media
is a huge platform which advertises the picture, movie and video that contain the attractive image of drugs which are used by a famous actor or sportsman. People who
are consider
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have considered
consider
are considering
are considered
him as a role model, would definitely follow their footsteps
,
Accept space
,
and begin to learn about those drugs. By the time, there would pass
this
habit to their peers and friends.
Addcition
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Addiction
and abuse of the
drug
is dangerous as it would
associated
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associate
with health risk, including psychological problems. At one point of their life, they are ready to harm themselves, or even commit
sucide
the act of killing yourself
suicide
.
Therefore
,
youth
must need a help to combat against
this
growing problem. One of the proposals would be that young people should be aware
on
Suggestion
of
about
the consequences of the addiction and
this
awareness should be began from the school.
Furthermore
,
government
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the government
should impose the law that advertisement of the prevented or illegal
drug
by anyone, including movie or sports stars, should be prevented.
This
has to be regularly
monitor
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monitored
by the respective authority. In conclusion, using
drug
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the drug
drugs
is popular among the younger people due to the influence of media,
thus
contributing to create the lack of good role model. As
this
habit
is severly affect
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severely affects
is severely affect
health
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the health
of the people, actions have to be taken to assist the
youth
to fight against
this
issue.
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