Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When discussing whether women should stay home and raise their children, rather than going to work, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue.

Although

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some believe that fathers have an

equall

having the same quantity, value, or measure as another

equal

equally

responsibility in the child's

education

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, I believe mothers are far more important, and should focus on

rasing

increasing in quantity or value

raising

easing

their children. In the following

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an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

I will elaborate on my

opinon

a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty

opinion

opinions

and provide examples. The

childs

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child's

emotional bonding with his

mother

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begins during pregnancy, and

as a result

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mothers

are

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is

much more attentive to the neonate's needs during his early years.

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, activities

such

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as

breast feeding

give suck to

breastfeeding

, hugging and sleeping together strengthen

this

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relationship and the infant learns to trust his

mother

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at a very young age.

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, females are substantially more important in

rasing

increasing in quantity or value

raising

children rather than men. According to the New York Times

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for example

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, children who grew up with a stay at home

mother

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, had less emotional distress during high school years.

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example illustrates the importance of maternal role in the

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child's

education

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, and fact that in families where mothers are focused on the

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child's

children

education

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, children have a better emotional balance. Another view in favour of my opinion, is that mothers are much more

tollerant

showing respect for the rights or opinions or practices of others

tolerant

and less

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

than men, making them ideal candidates for raising children. Unlike men, most of the women are less interested in professional development, higher salary and social success and are more devoted to the family needs and the

childs

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child's

children

child

wishes.

Mother

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's for examples, would prefer to spend their time with their children in the garden, rather than going out to drink beer with friends.

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, mothers

whould

past tense of "will"

would

should

go to see the

childs

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children's

children

concert,

on

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at

the expense of a working day.

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shows that mothers are focused more on the child, and

hence

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should take a greater part in the

childs

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child

child's

raising. In conclusion, the

mother

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's bonding with the

newboren

recently born

newborn

, as well as its

prefences

a strong liking

preferences

provinces

in the family and not in personal development

makes

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make

her an ideal role model to raise children. Because of

this

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, I believe that mothers should focus on the

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child's

children

child

education

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.