Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When discussing whether women should stay home and raise their children, rather than going to work, one should bear in mind the complexity of the issue.
Although
some believe that fathers have an
equall
having the same quantity, value, or measure as another
equal
equally
responsibility in the child's
education
, I believe mothers are far more important, and should focus on
rasing
increasing in quantity or value
raising
easing
their children. In the following
essya
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
I will elaborate on my
opinon
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
and provide examples. The
childs
Suggestion
child's
emotional bonding with his
mother
begins during pregnancy, and
as a result
mothers
are
Suggestion
is
much more attentive to the neonate's needs during his early years.
Furthermore
, activities
such
as
breast feeding
give suck to
breastfeeding
, hugging and sleeping together strengthen
this
relationship and the infant learns to trust his
mother
at a very young age.
Consequently
, females are substantially more important in
rasing
increasing in quantity or value
raising
children rather than men. According to the New York Times
,
Accept space
,
for example
, children who grew up with a stay at home
mother
, had less emotional distress during high school years.
This
example illustrates the importance of maternal role in the
childs
Suggestion
child's
education
, and fact that in families where mothers are focused on the
childs
Suggestion
child's
children
education
, children have a better emotional balance. Another view in favour of my opinion, is that mothers are much more
tollerant
showing respect for the rights or opinions or practices of others
tolerant
and less
competative
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
than men, making them ideal candidates for raising children. Unlike men, most of the women are less interested in professional development, higher salary and social success and are more devoted to the family needs and the
childs
Suggestion
child's
children
child
wishes.
Mother
's for examples, would prefer to spend their time with their children in the garden, rather than going out to drink beer with friends.
Also
, mothers
whould
past tense of "will"
would
should
go to see the
childs
Suggestion
children's
children
concert,
on
Suggestion
at
the expense of a working day.
This
shows that mothers are focused more on the child, and
hence
should take a greater part in the
childs
Suggestion
child
child's
raising. In conclusion, the
mother
's bonding with the
newboren
recently born
newborn
, as well as its
prefences
a strong liking
preferences
provinces
in the family and not in personal development
makes
Suggestion
make
her an ideal role model to raise children. Because of
this
, I believe that mothers should focus on the
childs
Suggestion
child's
children
child
education
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender roles
  • nurturing
  • empathy
  • sensitivity
  • maternal instinct
  • paternal involvement
  • child's development
  • work-life balance
  • gender equality
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