Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Over the past few decades,

technology

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has comprehensively occupied our lives, and have made it effortless rather convenient. Some people view

technology

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as a blessing, since it is highly responsible for keeping thousands of people connected. While, others believe that it has adversely affected customs and values. I think the benefits of

technology

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are more superior than its drawback. Undoubtedly, now there is hardly any field which is not

technology

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-driven, be it cooking, cleaning, communication or many more. In the past, it was extremely difficult for workplaces

to deliver

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deliver

their message to other overseas companies. But, now

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process can take place in a blink of an eye with the help of an e-mail or fax.

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, social networking websites

has shortened

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have shortened

the distance and have provided and an incredibly easy and economical way for its users’ to communicate with their loved ones via phone calls or video messages.

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, it was recently published in a local newspaper that it takes nanoseconds for an electronic-mail to be delivered from one computer to another.

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, the ubiquity of

technology

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has made it difficult for people to pursue their cultural values which is viewed by some as a major drawback. Social media plays a vital role to influence one’s mind, people now instantly follow trends related to clothing, lifestyle, makeup and many more.

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, they fail to understand how

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acts could drift them away from their cultural values and can lose identity.

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, an American survey was conducted and it was found that due to the frequent use of media sites, languages can be intermixed and vocabulary can be changed, which poses risk to several languages. To sum up,

technology

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serves humankind in the best possible and it’s advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

294 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

revolutionize communication
global relationships
cultural exchange
cultural homogenization
diminish traditions
uniform global culture
cultural elements
dilute traditions
dominant languages
marginalizing
communication tools
cultural preservation
intercultural connectivity
cultural identity
cultural diversity
positive and negative outcomes

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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

Some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with other types of help rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An international company is offering a temporary job for work experience, write a letter to apply for that job. You need to explain where did you find this information why you want to apply this job what qualification you have what position you want to apply Write on this topic

People buy good products that work; therefore, advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?