Some think that teenagers should follow older people's rules. Others think that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Considering

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

people's views

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some people say that teenagers should follow the footsteps of older people and understand their way of life while others say that they should oppose the rules which older people follows.In

this

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esaay

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

we will talk about considering

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

ways to follow

rules

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the rules

of older people or reject them. With age comes

sheer amount

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the sheer amount

of experience.Older people have been through all ups and downs of their life and so they have the

valueable

having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange

valuable

experience for

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

situations.Based on that they make certain rules so whoever follows them never gets into any trouble.

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modern teenagers

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days

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day

lives the life of their

own but

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own, but

following the rules can help them stay away from consequences.

For instance

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sometimes they wanna go

for

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a party at

midnight but

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midnight, but

their older relatives might deny.The reason is nothing but the danger of theft at night.Teenagers do not consider it

seriously but

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seriously, but

being alone on the streets at night is dangerous and you might get robbed.So following rules

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are

a great advantage.

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the thoughts of old aged people may vary immensely from teenagers.Old aged people have thoughts of being

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peace and love spending their own time on a chair rather than doing some activity which modern teenagers love to do.Sometimes

challemging

requiring full use of your abilities or resources

challenging

older people's rules is not any crime.

The rules like

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The rules, like

not being too

connective

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connected

to technology is not completely perfect.

Yes there

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Yes, there

is no doubt that it should be only used for

limited time but

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a limited time, but

a limited time but

not being completely staying away from

techonlogy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

.So it is natural for teenagers to challenge certain rules. All in all

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refers to the speaker or writer

can say that some rules are

ment

mean or intend to express or convey

meant

to be broken and some are

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mean or intend to express or convey

meant

to be followed.Teenagers should follow rules which are extremely helpful to them and should do what they like when certain rules are not applicable.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

299 words

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