Some think that teenagers should follow older people's rules. Others think that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Considering
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
people's views
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,
some people say that teenagers should follow the footsteps of older people and understand their way of life while others say that they should oppose the rules which older people follows.In
this
esaay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
we will talk about considering
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways to follow
rules
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the rules
of older people or reject them. With age comes
sheer amount
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the sheer amount
of experience.Older people have been through all ups and downs of their life and so they have the
valueable
having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
experience for
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
situations.Based on that they make certain rules so whoever follows them never gets into any trouble.
However
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,
modern teenagers
this
days
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day
lives the life of their
own but
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own, but
following the rules can help them stay away from consequences.
For instance
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,
sometimes they wanna go
for
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to
a party at
midnight but
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midnight, but
their older relatives might deny.The reason is nothing but the danger of theft at night.Teenagers do not consider it
seriously but
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seriously, but
being alone on the streets at night is dangerous and you might get robbed.So following rules
is
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are
a great advantage.
On the other hand
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the thoughts of old aged people may vary immensely from teenagers.Old aged people have thoughts of being
in
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at
peace and love spending their own time on a chair rather than doing some activity which modern teenagers love to do.Sometimes
challemging
requiring full use of your abilities or resources
challenging
older people's rules is not any crime.
The rules like
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The rules, like
not being too
connective
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connected
to technology is not completely perfect.
Yes there
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Yes, there
is no doubt that it should be only used for
limited time but
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a limited time, but
a limited time but
not being completely staying away from
techonlogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.So it is natural for teenagers to challenge certain rules. All in all
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can say that some rules are
ment
mean or intend to express or convey
meant
to be broken and some are
ment
mean or intend to express or convey
meant
to be followed.Teenagers should follow rules which are extremely helpful to them and should do what they like when certain rules are not applicable.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditions
  • Elders
  • Authority
  • Innovative
  • Exploration
  • Adaptation
  • Critical thinking
  • Upholding values
  • Questioning norms
  • Independence
  • Dialogue
  • Informed decisions
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