Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good father.

No one can deny that

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the personality of the pupils, one of the bright ideas is that

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teachers can train students to be

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wonderful

father

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or

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. In my opinion,

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from childhood to adolescence spend much

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at

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than at home, so learning

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something different

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the academic curriculum will be attractive to them. Being a parent is not a simple thing, that's why it is important to know

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how to grow up a child and to deal with him/her in different situations,

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skill is well known to teachers

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because it is the core of their job.

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, tutors can deal with a crying child effectively, know the reason

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crying and

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, solve the problem of him/her.

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skill can be transferred to the student. So, why the government does not apply

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as a social activity in

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, the community needs a highly skilful parent who

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some characteristics to be a role model to the children. Being a father or a mother, you have to

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in treating a special problem for a child, but more assertive with the youths because it is a dangerous stage and they may harm themselves. For

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, if parents discover that their teenage son addicted

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, they must treat him immediately. Because

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he may suffer from liver problems in the future. To summarize, to be a parent is not only a talent, but it is a skill

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can be learned, particularly in

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where the students spend most of their time.