Defrostation is a serious problem facing our environment nowadays,discuss its causes and solutions suggested for this problem.

Deforestation is rising nowadays by an enormous amount.
Particulary
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Particularly
Particular
logging is the main reason that makes people do
alot
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a lot
of felling processes
,
Accept space
,
and
thus
furthermore
leads to serious harms to our surrounding environment.
Firstly
,
Accept space
,
I will discuss the most
fundmental
serving as an essential component
fundamental
problem which is the climate change.The
prescence
the state of being present; current existence
presence
of trees and rainforests in our planet has
an
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a
vital role in climate regulation.
For instance
respiration done
by
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with
trees' leaves affects air humidity
,
Accept space
,
and
consequently
air temperature.
Also absence
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The also absence
of trees may increase the issue called green house or
in other words
global warming.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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