Some people believe that the responsibility is with the government to control the rise in obesity in children, others think the parents are the cause. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Peoples opinions differ as to whether the onus lies with the

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or with the parents for the

increase

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in

obessed

excessively fat

obese

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children. A few people believe that the

government

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ought to be held liable for the rising number of overweight children,

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, some believe that the parents should be held accountable because children spend more

time

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with them and because they provide more of what they consume. In my strong conviction, it depends on the

child

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because they are in full

control

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of what they eat and are not concerned about the aftermath. Admittedly, some consider that it is the responsibility of the administration to handle the hike for several reasons.

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, they possess the authority required to impose tax on these foods known to be the leading cause of bulk-

weight

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such

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as canned foods

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known as ready to eat foods. A survey that was conducted by the NAFDAC in 2017 revealed that about 50% of people living in urban areas had these meals as their staple food owing to the

fact

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that a lot of people live busy lives and have little or no

time

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to themselves to prepare healthy less-fattening

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opinions differ as to whether the onus lies with the

government

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or with the parents for the

increase

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in

obesed

excessively fat

obese

abused

children. A few people believe that the

government

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ought to be held liable for the rising number of overweight children,

In contrast

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, some believe that the parents should be held accountable because children spend more

time

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with them and because they provide more of what they consume. In my strong

conviction it

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conviction, it

depends on the

child

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because they are in full

control

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of what they eat and are not concerned about the aftermath. Admittedly, some consider that it is the responsibility of the administration to handle the hike for several reasons.

Firstly

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, they possess the authority required to impose tax on these foods known to be the leading cause of

bulk

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the bulk weight

weight

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such

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as canned foods

otherwise

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known as ready to eat foods. A survey that was conducted by the NAFDAC in 2017

revelead

make visible

revealed

that about 50% of people living in urban areas had these meals as their staple food owing to the

fact

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that a lot of people live busy lives and have little or no

time

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to themselves to prepare healthy less-fattening meals

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.

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, these foods are less

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expensive, thus

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they are highly purchased.

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, an imposition of taxation will

increase

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cost

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costs

on them and as

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discourage their purchase.

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, parents should be made to account for their children's

health

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because they provide most of what they consume. A

child

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usually is not financially

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to buy whatever they want and in most cases their parents do.

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the parent

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has

the habit of consuming these foods will hardly avoid their children from having them because children learn faster from what they see. According to an article in the 2013 edition, the author highlighted that most of the habits portrayed by children were

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those of their parents.

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, children tend to spend more of their

time

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with their parents and so, if what they feast on

can not

can not

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be regulated,

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the chances of the

child

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being healthy is slim which will apparently lead to

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weight problem

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weight problems

the weight problem

a weight problem

. To conclude, despite varying opinions, I believe that the

child

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has a bigger role to play in the

control

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of their

weight

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owing to the

fact

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that they determine what they want to ingest with little or no interest on their dangers.

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, I would recommend proper awareness programs to be made to enable them the opportunity to know about their

health

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addition, these foods are less expensive,

thus

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they are highly purchased.

However

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, an imposition of taxation will

increase

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the cost on them and as

such

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discourage their purchase.

On the other hand

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, parents should be made to account for their children's

health

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because they provide most of what they consume. A

child

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usually is not financially buoyant to buy whatever they want and in most cases their parents do.

Moreover

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, parents that possess the habit of consuming these foods will hardly avoid their children from having them because children learn faster from what they see. According to an article in the 2013 edition, the author highlighted that most of the habits portrayed by children were

also

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those of their parents.

Furthermore

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, children tend to spend more of their

time

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with their parents and so, if what they feast on cannot be regulated,

then

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the chances of the

child

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being healthy is slim which will apparently lead to

weight

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problems. To conclude, despite varying opinions, I believe that the

child

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has a bigger role to play in the

control

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of their

weight

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owing to the

fact

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that they determine what they want to ingest with little or no interest on their dangers.

However

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, I would recommend proper awareness programs to be made to enable them the opportunity to know about their

health

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.