Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

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It is believed that popularity not only brings advantages, but

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some disadvantages for the public figures. In my opinion, being popular has more pros than cons. One of the major benefits of stardom is being valued by others as a person. Celebrities are likely to receive more respect and priority in many cases for their extraordinary images.

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, they get more opportunities because of the networking they have, which help them to facilitate their career progression.

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, as they have a face value, they are paid more compared to others for their work;

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, being famous increases the financial strength of a person.

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, famous people receive more privileges than others.

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, a recent survey conducted by Vogue magazine reveals that the net wealth of the film stars is much higher than ordinary workers.

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, celebrities often face a privacy violation. It is a common problem for the famous people for being followed by the paparazzi. Sometimes, their private issues get viral through the news reports or social networking sites.

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, they have the highest possibility of facing personal problems.

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, the divorce rate is comparatively higher among celebrities than ordinary people and one of the key reasons for their relationship b

reak-ups

the termination or disintegration of a relationship (between persons or nations)

breakups

break-up

breakup

is scandals that reported from various media portals. In conclusion, while the major benefit of fame is, it allows people to have h

onor,

bestow honor or rewards upon

honour

the drawback is the chances of private issues being explored.

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, as long as the stars are involving themselves for w

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work, the advantages that they will receive from the s

tardom

a large structure for open-air sports or entertainments

stadium

will outweigh the drawbacks.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Public scrutiny
Intrusive
Endorsements
Sponsorships
Financial security
High-profile collaborations
Social influence
Philanthropic efforts
Trust issues
Mental health challenges
Substance abuse
Pressures of celebrity
Expectations
Disconnect from reality
Normalcy

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